This is how the story should read:

There were two students who went to Kidbrooke School. One student was called Rahma who was from Somalia in Africa. She came to live in England because of the war in her country. She has four brothers who are all older than her. Rahma enjoys all her lessons at school and is very good at running. Rahma is twelve years old and comes to school by bus.

The second student's name is Sofia who is also twelve years old. Sofia is from Lisbon, the capital city of Portugal, and came to live in London last year. She lives with her brothers and sister and mother, but her father lives in Portugal. Next year Sofia's father is coming to visit her and her family. She likes school very much but doesn't like drawing very much because she finds it hard.

Both these students are in Year 8 and like using computers. Both like talking very much and sometimes sing in class.